See now that's funny.
Take note Harry.
For a decent comic strip you need the following.
1. An idea (not just an attempt at having a dig)
2. Some Humour
3. Minimum text to convey the story
4. Characters people can relate to
I have redone a simplified cartoon for Matt/Farmer Les/Half of Kilroy. To help Matt understand the cartoon:
1. The cartoon parodies W1N claim to have the best players but willing to mass recruit CoWS. In the past W1N have selected one or two players from tribes. The joke is that although there are high standards the player attempting to join the tribe fails to spell his name and is still granted admittance. TBH I made this up as I wasn't actually at the interview and I think that Sammy is able to spell his name. And it doesn't mean that there aren't some fine players in W1N, I should know :icon_wink:
2. Parody is humour (through use of irony and satire) although it may be difficult for you to understand, but we need to be able to laugh at ourselves...
3. I have reduced the number of words down for you and simplified the text. I will write larger if that helps.
4. The characters are W1N team mates, in particular Sammy-K. Mail him if you are unfamiliar with him, he is a friendly guy, you should be able to relate to him...
Hey Sammy, hurts that you have forgotten me, but we all know you mate, so here is one especially for you.....(I was going to post this in your SammyK thread, but here is good)