Warriors and Warlords !

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DeletedUser7697

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This is my first time doing P&P please comment on it , so i can do well next time [;

Tonight , the story will be about 103 Warriors and Warlords hugging around uk5 .
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They started nobling their farm .


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They look for jobs that make them look cool

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just becouse they look noob that doesn't mean incoming scare them :p

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This is how they build their village .

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They pull in newcomer :D

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Does't they know the something call Noble planner

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First time [; please support :D
 

DeletedUser7217

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Nice PnP not too much stuff to rip, some old news but yeah it's ok
 

DeletedUser

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3/10 Not enough text IMO but it gets the point across pretty easy so thats a +2.

So 5/10
 

DeletedUser

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lol so glad my tribe is of so much interest and as your obviously a member of WAW you wont mind telling me who you are
 

DeletedUser

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rip on this blod appears to not know they had a NAP with WAW lolz
 

DeletedUser

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Just seen this and thought you did well in getting the content but i don't feel you made the most out of it when presenting it maybe think you need to capitalize on the wording more when creating this sort of PnP. So yea for a first attempt 5/10 i feel you didn't make the most out of the content you had but still good.

 

DeletedUser

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I'd agree with the above. 4 or 5 out of 10. Lol better then mine XD I suck at PnP
 
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